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"Issue 118 October 14th 2005"
Published by Joe Robson http://adcopywriting.com  
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1. Just Thinking ....
2. Article ... "How To Get Into An Article Writing Mindset"
By Joe Robson
3. Article ... "10 Building Blocks Of An Effective Article" 
By Joe Robson 
4. Article ... "Online Copywriting vs. Writing Copy for Print"
by Joel Walsh
5. Article ... "Reality in Advertising"
By Robert W. Bly
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1. Just Thinking ....

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Hi there, long time:-)

This edition was originally published a few weeks ago, but I have just discovered that, even though I re-sent it after my mailing software failed, only a few hundred were actually delivered. So this could be the third copy you have received. Lucky you:-)

Sorry, but maybe you will now understand why I hate technology so much - even though it's what my whole lifestyle is built around. It's not so much the technology I hate, but the feeling of helplessness and frustration I get when it goes wrong. Especially when it makes a fool of me!

2 days ago my JoesDeals list received a garbled email from me. It was the technology bug again. And that's when my techie discovered that this newsletter had also not been fully delivered 3 weeks ago..

A few hours ago I emailed ( successfully ) my special JoesDeals Members with a fantastic deal I have put together, that's extremely time sensitive. And it's not about Internet Marketing, even though it does ALSO offer Resale Rights if you're a marketer. Next time this Digest goes out the deal will have ended, so don't miss out on it. You have to be a FREE Member before entering the Members area. Just sign up and login to the site immediately and see what's available. In a few days I will be offering another great deal on a fantastic new piece of software that EVERY marketer should own. So join up now at http://joesdeals.com  

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I know it's been a while since my previous newsletter, but I've been involved in so many projects that I simply lose track of time. Not just hours or days, but weeks seem to fly by without me noticing. Of course some might say it's a symptom of advancing age, but I enjoy it so I have no complaints. If I didn't enjoy it, I wouldn't do it!

My wife and I have just returned to the UK after a 3 month stay in the USA, where  I have been working on a couple of projects, and travelling whenever we could. Thank heavens for Laptops and the Internet!

We are returning to the US soon to spend 6 months of the year in the house we bought out there. So we'll miss the UK winters, which we're terribly upset about:-)

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There are 2 people who literally changed my life and had a massive influence on  reshaping my Copywriting and Marketing Career.

One was Ted Nicholas the Direct Marketing Giant, and I'm glad to say he is online now.

The other guy is someone  I'll bet you have never heard of ...

Pat Quinn!

Pat (Patrick) is a massively successful UK Copywriter and author in the UK. Last time I spoke to him he was living on the borders of Scotland - even though he's a Londoner!

He had a massive influence on my thinking, my focus, my style, and my confidence, and I will be forever grateful to him. I would say that his no-bullshit, down to earth approach to copywriting helped me to finally find my own unique Copywriting voice. His use of humor gave me the confidence to use my own style of humor, and showed me HOW to use to best effect! 

And that 'voice' later helped me create the unique and outrageously successful Newbie Club, as well as helping me to earn an extremely healthy income from doing something I love - selling and writing!

So I'm delighted to say that he has recently written and published a digital Copywriting book that will influence your Copywriting efforts from now on. It's called WordPower3 and has my wholehearted recommendation

Read about it here - and BUY it!   http://tncinfo.com/wordpower   And while you're there sign up for his brilliant monthly newsletter. I LOVE it!

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It's a 6 hour audio and text transcript, and it's the first in a series we are calling 'Joe Robson's Internet Marketing Masterclass". That's Louis' title - but I like it:-)

Feedback has been quite amazing, but what is even more amazing is that their are still a bunch of the 100 Resale Rights available.

Then I realized that because of all the different projects Louis and I are working on individually, I have seriously neglected promoting the Resale Rights side of the business. My fault and Louis should have slapped my hand before now!

The product is a series of real 'there-before-your-very-eyes' tutorials showing how I repackaged some of MY actual OLDER products that are on sale RIGHT NOW, and made them come alive all over again. We even show how one repacked and 'aging'
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Poem by a Copywriter  ...

NOW... AT LAST...THE NEW AMAZING
Gem of genius slowly blazing.
The one man who, without a doubt
Knows what this business is about.
The man who screams, when words are changed,
That all the changers are deranged.
Still, were he quieter or politer,
He wouldn't be a copywriter.

By Draper Daniels, Copywriter from way back

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Keep smilin':-)

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2. Article ... "How To Get Into An Article Writing Mindset"
Joe Robson http://joerobson.com 

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Sometimes it's really difficult just to sit down 'cold' and write an article. But procrastinating makes no difference, because when you eventually return to it, that 'block' is still there. Here's a few helpful pointers ...

1.  Remove your limits

Reduce your subject to a single core word and then brainstorm around it. For example, if you're trying to write about "Study Skills", expand your thinking to "School". Now jot down everything that comes to mind when you think about School, and when you run out of ideas start asking yourself open questions around the subject and noting your answers.

Examples:

Assume you are wanting to write about "how to improve your job prospects"

What did I do in my first job?
Why did I enjoy it/hate it?
When did I realize that it was time to change?

This will help you get back into the mindset of someone struggling with job issues of all kinds and you'll start to get a feel for their concerns and worries.

2.  Restore your focus

Once you've started to understand the general feelings of your readers, allow your mind to focus back on your original topic of Study Skills. From your new perspective, what questions would you ask? What would you want to know? Is this really a "Studying" issue or is it more about Time Management or being able to work without distractions or being paralyzed by the fear of not doing well?

3. Be your audience

Write each question on a separate sheet of paper; don't stop until you have at least ten and preferably more. Stay in the mindset of your readers until you feel you've asked every major question that concerns them.

4. Take a step back

Put your pile of question aside for a few hours, overnight if possible. Don't consciously think about them; just go about your day as usual. Give your subconscious time to process them without any further prompting from you. If new questions come to mind jot them down somewhere safe and then forget about them.

5. Get out your pen and write

When you're ready, sit down with your pages of questions and simply start to answer them. Writing your answers by hand can give you access to ideas that might be missed if you type them. Don't edit yourself at this stage. Using Speech to Text software or a digital recorder can also be helpful in bypassing the internal editor.

Imagine someone sitting in front of you asking for advice and just talk to them. Keep your tone natural and conversational and stay with the question-and-answer format.

6. Edit lightly

Trust your first instincts. Proof-read and correct any obvious errors, but don't do any major editing until your piece has had time to "sit" for a while. Again, leaving it overnight will give you a fresh perspective the next time you look at it, but even if your deadline doesn't allow for that it's important to give yourself a break from it.

When you're pushed for time, writing several articles at one sitting can create enough change of focus to make you "forget" the one you've just written.

7. Polish it up

Short articles are unlikely to need major editing if you've written them as described here. They will flow easily and naturally already and having each Q & A on a separate sheet makes it easier to select only the ones you want. Your job now is to put them in a reasonably logical sequence and make sure they're understandable and that the reader is led smoothly from one question and answer to the next.

8. Top and tail it

Write a brief introductory paragraph as a "teaser" for the main article. Many article directories now put the first paragraph of each piece into RSS feeds which are picked up by other websites, so you'll want to make sure that your two or three major keywords appear at least once in that first paragraph.

Write another short paragraph to summarize the major points of the article and provide some ideas for the reader to explore the subject further. Don't of course forget your own resource box like mine below.

 9. Submit it!

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3. Article ... "10 Building Blocks Of An Effective Article"
Joe Robson  http://adcopywriting.com

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Before writing an article, have you ever felt overwhelmed by a blank sensation, not knowing where to start?

... I'll bet you have!

This checklist should help you eliminate some common problems in writing articles:

1. Have a specific purpose in mind.

Always have a specific purpose in mind before you begin writing: you should be crystal clear about what are you hoping to accomplish by writing your article.
Is it an article clarifying an issue for your customers, to attract prospects, to improve the link popularity for your website?

2. Know your target population.

Before writing an article, conduct research on the target population. What are their experience, their interest, and their wants in the chosen topic? What pain or problem do they try to avoid?

3. Develop a detailed outline first, stressing on the benefits.

Now that you have a purpose and a target, organize your article so that scanning it quickly will show immediately to your reader how he will benefit from it and what are the most important points.

4. Stop your reader in his tracks with your title.

Your title should grab the reader's attention and 'force' him to read your first paragraph. Using your most important benefit usually does it. If you struggle with Headlines, this will definitely help you ... http://headlinewriter.com

5. Start your article with the most important information

Again, do not keep your most important information for the conclusion! Give it immediately and develop on it in the following paragraphs.

6. Keep jargon to a minimum.

If possible, avoid jargon as well as prejudices and insinuations. Write your article so that even a child can understand it.

7. Make your article warm and personal.

Speak direct to the reader. Use a lot of 'you'.
Reading your article, the reader should feel warmth and empathy, knowing that you have the same problems and goals than him.

8. Keep sentences short and simple.

Using short and simple sentences will allow a fluid and easy reading, preventing your reader to get bored.

9. Have someone from the target population critique your article.

Who can give you a better feedback than someone from your target population? It will help you

10. Spend more time rewriting than writing.

Besides formatting your article for easy reading and nice presentation, be sure to use tools or an external editor to carefully proofread your writing for grammatical and spelling errors.

Remember that the more writing you do, the better you will get. And when you are in the habit of writing, then article writing will not seem as difficult as now!

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4. Article .....  "Online Copywriting vs. Writing Copy for Print"
by Joel Walsh

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Online copywriting has the same goals as print content, but there at least seven distinct points of departure between writing copy online and for print.

Online copywriting and print copywriting are very different. You hear that all the time. But that's an observation as unhelpful as it is obvious. What are the real similarities and differences between writing for the web and writing for print?

Similarities between Online Copywriting and Print Copywriting

Despite their differences, copywriting for print and online copywriting share some essential similarities, which are just as important to understand as the differences:

  • Communication: you're trying to get ideas across.
  • Quality: spelling, grammar, proper word choice, clarity of expression, and other marks of quality are generally the same.
  • Clear tone: the author's attitude toward his or her subject--authority, humor, cleverness, outrage, fascination, dismay, glee--should be clearly defined for the reader to involve him or herself in the writing.
  • Sales tactics: you still have to appeal to both reason and the emotions, provide calls to action, and employ the other traditional sales-writing tactics when you are writing for sales.

Differences between Online Copywriting and Print Copywriting

1) Most web and email newsletter content has to appear more informational than promotional.

Subtly promotional content usually does better than out-and-out sales copy. Site visitors and newsletter readers who aren't ready for a sales pitch--usually, that's most of them--may still be open to informational content that presents a problem and shows how it can be solved using the product or service being sold on the website.

As for readers who are ready for a sales pitch, they don't need to be told twice on two different web pages. Aim for one sales page per offering, unless you are testing out different sales pages, or unless you only make the link to one of the sales pages prominent, with the rest of the pages serving as landing pages for search engine traffic.

Purely informational content with no clear promotional angle should make up at least a few of your pages. The credibility of a website depends on solid information. Natural links will come more readily to pure information, too.

A sales or lead-capture paragraph or two in the sidebar of every promotional or purely informational page will also help you get responses from your library of informational content.

2) Web content must be easy to scan as well as read word-for-word.

"Scannable" means that the key ideas of content are clear at a glance, and statements make sense when read out of context.

Scanning for main ideas is preferred over reading word-for-word among a large majority of web users. Nearly all of the fully literate users scan. Even if inclined to read a page word-for-word, highly literate users will scan the page first to make sure it will repay their investment of reading time. As for less-literate visitors who cannot parse words quickly enough to scan, scannable content will usually be easier to read word-for-word since it tends to be simpler.

3) With web content, quantity is almost as important as quality.

If you try to make every page a killer sales letter or literary masterpiece, you will end up with 10 pages instead of 100 (or 100 instead of 1000, depending on your budget). Fewer pages mean fewer visitors, both new visitors and repeat visitors.

Besides, since most literate users will only scan the page, your investment in literary merit or sales tactics is largely unappreciated.

4) Syndication and content distribution add new considerations.

Thanks to syndication and content distribution (e.g., RSS and Creative Commons), web content is its own promotional vehicle. Other websites, RSS feeds, and email newsletters will reprint good content without asking anything in return. Unlike with traditional advertising and promotion, you do not need to buy space to send out your web content message. Unlike with public relations, you do not need to filter your message through reporters, either.

You do, however, have to write for publishers and gate-keepers as well as end-readers when syndicating or distributing content. Informational value becomes more important since something that is too promotional will not take wing. Other syndication-specific issues include syndication-friendly keywords, titles, page length, tone, style, and formatting.

5) Less-literate and less-fluent readership requires simpler writing.

Less-literate people constitute up to half of the population of the wealthy countries, and somewhat more in many of the less wealthy countries. Less fluent non-native speakers of English are also a huge part of the online audience.

An eighth-grade reading level is as literate as the essential pages of your site should get, unless they are aimed at an audience that is necessarily literate (as is this page).

6) International readership requires more universal terms of expression.

Cultural, legal, or local references and nuances, as well as anything written for effect, will make less sense to people outside your country or even your region.

North Americans writing for dramatic emphasis and Britons writing for pointed understatement will write right past each other. Complaints about sky-rocketing housing costs will resonate among North Americans from Montreal to Miami to San Diego, but less so among North Americans from Ottawa to San Antonio to Cheyenne.

Try to write in terms anyone would understand: birth, death, family, thirst, hunger, love, sadness, the sun, the moon, buzzing insects and singing birds.

7) Building trust is more important on the web.

At the very least, print takes enough money and effort to buy the paper and ink. Anyone at all can build a web page with little effort. Besides, the web is filled with misinformation. Make sure your web pages look trustworthy with solid facts and convincing logic, and no grammar or spelling errors.

In conclusion, Nobel-prize-winning literature may make bad web content, but that doesn't mean there aren't standards. Follow the standards for good online copywriting, or your visitors may go to another site.

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Joel Walsh owns UpMarket Content:   http://upmarketcontent.com

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5. Article ... "Reality in Advertising"
By Robert W. Bly

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In 1961, Rosser Reeves published his classic book Reality in Advertising in which he introduced the notion of the Unique Selling Proposition, or USP.

Today the book is out of print and difficult to get. As a result, most practicing direct marketers don’t know the original definition of a USP. Their lack of knowledge often produces USPs that are weak and ineffective.

According to Reeves, there are three requirements for a USP (and I am quoting, in the italics, from Reality in Advertising directly):

1. Each advertisement must make a proposition to the consumer. Each must say, “Buy this product, and you will get this specific benefit.” Your headline must contain a benefit – a promise to the reader.

2. The proposition must be one that the competition either cannot, or does not, offer.
Here’s where the “unique” in Unique Selling Proposition comes in. It is not enough merely to offer a benefit. You must also differentiate your product.

3. The proposition must be so strong that it can move the mass millions, i.e., pull over new customers to your product. The differentiation cannot be trivial. It must be a difference that is very important to the reader.

Why do so many advertisements fail?

One reason is that the marketer has not formulated a strong USP for his product and built his advertising upon it.

Formulating a USP isn’t difficult, but it does take some thinking; and many people don’t like to think. But when you start creating direct mail and advertising without first thinking about what your USP is, your marketing is weak because there is nothing in it to compel the reader to respond. It looks and sounds like everyone else, and what it says isn’t important to the reader.

In general advertising for packaged goods, marketers achieve differentiation by building a strong brand at a cost of millions or even billions of dollars. Coca Cola has an advantage because of its brand. If you want a cola, you can get it from a dozen soda makers. But if you want a Coke, you can only get it from Coca Cola. Intel has achieved a similar brand dominance, at an extraordinary cost, with its Pentium line of semiconductors.

Most direct marketers are too small, and have too strong a need to generate an immediate positive ROI from their marketing, to engage in this kind of expensive brand building. So we use other means to achieve the differentiation in our USP.

One popular method is to differentiate your product or service from the competition based on a feature that your product or service has and they don’t.

The common error here is building the USP around a feature that, while different, is unimportant to the prospect, and therefore unlikely to move him to try your product or service.

For example, in the pump industry, it is common for pump manufacturers to attempt to win customers by advertising a unique design feature.

Unfortunately, these design twists often result in no real performance improvement, no real advantage that the customer cares about.

Realizing that they could not differentiate based on a concrete design principle, Blackmer pump took a different tact: to create a USP based upon application of the product. Their trade ads showed a Yellow Pages ripped out of an industrial buying guide, full of listings for pump manufacturers, including Blackmer. Their company name was circled in pen. The headline of the ad read,

“There are only certain times you should call Blackmer for a pump. Know when?”

Body copy explained (and I am paraphrasing here),

“In many applications, Blackmer performs no better or worse than any pumps, and so we are not a particularly advantageous choice.”

But, the ad went on, for certain applications (viscous fluids, fluids containing abrasives, slurries, and a few other situations) Blackmer was proven to outperform all other pumps, and were the logical brand of choice. Blackmer closed the ad by offering a free technical manual proving the claim. My old friend, Jim Alexander, of Alexander Marketing in Grand Rapid, Michigan, created this campaign and tells me it worked extremely well.

The easiest situation in which to create a strong USP is when your product has a unique feature – one that competitors lack – that delivers a strong benefit. This must be an advantage the customer really cares about. Not one that, though a difference, is trivial.

But what if such a proprietary advantage does not exist? What if your product is basically the same as the competition, with no special features?

Reeves has the answer here too. He said the uniqueness can either stem from a strong brand (already discussed as an option 95% of marketers can’t use) or from “a claim not otherwise made in that particular form of advertising” – that is, other products may have this feature too, but advertisers haven’t told consumers about it.

An example from packaged goods advertising: “M&Ms melt in your mouth, not in your hand.”

Once M&M established this claim as their USP, what could the competition do? Run an ad that said, “We also melt in your mouth, not in your hand!”?

In his book Scientific Advertising, Claude Hopkins gives an example of a USP that has become a classic story.

The short version:

An ad man walking through his beer client’s brewery was fascinated by a machine that blasted steam into beer bottles to sanitize them.

“Don’t use that in advertising,” the brewer told the ad man. “It is nothing unique; every brewer does the same.” “Maybe,” the ad man replied, “but I had never heard of it before, and neither has any of the beer-drinking public.”

He then created a successful ad campaign for a beer advertised as “so pure the bottles are washed in live steam.”

One more point: As direct marketers, we – unlike most general advertisers today – are compelled to create advertising that generates net revenues in excess of its cost.

Reeves believed all advertising had to do this. He defined advertising as “the art of getting a USP into the heads of the most people at the lowest possible cost.”

If I were to modify his definition, I would change it to “getting a USP into the heads of the people most likely to buy the product, at the lowest possible advertising cost.”

But who am I to quibble with the master?

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About the author:
Robert W. Bly is a freelance copywriter and the author of more than 50 books including The Complete Idiot’s Guide to Direct Marketing (Alpha). His e-mail address is rwbly@bly.com  and his Web site address is www.bly.com .

Bob Bly's best work on Headline Writing is contained in the colossal Copywriting course from Joe Robson at     http://headlinecourse.com

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